Moonship is a picture I started drawing nearly a year ago – while trying to figure out the direction pirategolf should take. I never really finished it but now that found it again on my harddrive I think it works quite well and I’m going to finish it somewhen in the future…
That’s still wrong with the picture:
- needs more color contrast – especially more difference between foreground and background
- should look like a stage at a theater at first – therefore the surface/shading of the waves is way too curved. Has to look more like a straight plank with the shape of a wave
- the figurehead needs more elaboration. Make it a sexy piece of wooden mermaid
- there are definitely too little parrots on screen
Notice anything else?